tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184420089456244214.post7877137978963070216..comments2023-10-11T23:57:49.521+08:00Comments on LEAF's World: 雨Leafhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18282662771746163850noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184420089456244214.post-1746996232051986712008-09-10T20:45:00.000+08:002008-09-10T20:45:00.000+08:00puppythanks for ur replyi couldn't disagree with u...puppy<BR/><BR/>thanks for ur reply<BR/>i couldn't disagree with u<BR/>as in ur first and second comments,u mention that my words doesn't tally, doesn't like the repetition,<BR/>so i take it and explained to you the reason why i do so in good intention.<BR/><BR/>this is not a poetry but a blog entry and the way i normally use to express my feeling.<BR/><BR/>we share opinions<BR/>and we shake hands<BR/>but never cross swordLeafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18282662771746163850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184420089456244214.post-37857206016325649342008-09-10T19:37:00.000+08:002008-09-10T19:37:00.000+08:00if this is not a poetrywhat is it?no one is righta...if this is not a poetry<BR/>what is it?<BR/><BR/>no one is right<BR/>and ono one is wrong<BR/>no rule<BR/>but there is a guide<BR/><BR/>i merely suggest something<BR/>u can either take it or leave it<BR/><BR/>we cross sword<BR/>we shake handAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184420089456244214.post-68755073693485171872008-09-09T18:42:00.000+08:002008-09-09T18:42:00.000+08:00since you are not facing the same situation with m...since you are not facing the same situation with me of course u wont feel it.<BR/><BR/>if im writing poetry according to tang dynasty or song dynasty periods then is a must for me to follow their metrical pattern and antithesis.<BR/><BR/>im just writing my feelings out, and this is not a poetry. Thus, no rules attach.Leafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18282662771746163850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184420089456244214.post-82170826109764762872008-09-09T17:51:00.000+08:002008-09-09T17:51:00.000+08:00how could 'di1' tally with 'you1' in this case? sh...how could 'di1' tally with 'you1' in this case? shouldnt they be adjective?<BR/><BR/>i dont feel the emphasis with the 2 repetation :PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184420089456244214.post-15691740322322645282008-09-08T21:20:00.000+08:002008-09-08T21:20:00.000+08:00puppythx for ur comment.anyway rain is counted by ...puppy<BR/>thx for ur comment.<BR/><BR/>anyway rain is counted by drops(滴)<BR/>this is why i choose 水滴(drops of water)。<BR/><BR/>and <BR/><BR/>repetition of using 何时 is to emphasize the restlessness towards<BR/>rainy season and endless worries.Leafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18282662771746163850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184420089456244214.post-41654562037880280392008-09-08T19:03:00.000+08:002008-09-08T19:03:00.000+08:00last sentencei dont like the 'di1', prefer 'lou4'i...last sentence<BR/>i dont like the 'di1', prefer 'lou4'<BR/>i dont like 'he2 shi2' repeated twice<BR/>i dont hv any preference now :P<BR/>u think lahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com