last sentencei dont like the 'di1', prefer 'lou4'i dont like 'he2 shi2' repeated twicei dont hv any preference now :Pu think lah
puppythx for ur comment.anyway rain is counted by drops(滴)this is why i choose 水滴(drops of water)。and repetition of using 何时 is to emphasize the restlessness towardsrainy season and endless worries.
how could 'di1' tally with 'you1' in this case? shouldnt they be adjective?i dont feel the emphasis with the 2 repetation :P
since you are not facing the same situation with me of course u wont feel it.if im writing poetry according to tang dynasty or song dynasty periods then is a must for me to follow their metrical pattern and antithesis.im just writing my feelings out, and this is not a poetry. Thus, no rules attach.
if this is not a poetrywhat is it?no one is rightand ono one is wrongno rulebut there is a guidei merely suggest somethingu can either take it or leave itwe cross swordwe shake hand
puppythanks for ur replyi couldn't disagree with uas in ur first and second comments,u mention that my words doesn't tally, doesn't like the repetition,so i take it and explained to you the reason why i do so in good intention.this is not a poetry but a blog entry and the way i normally use to express my feeling.we share opinionsand we shake handsbut never cross sword
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